Testimonial

“Thank you for your excellent work editing the
2nd edition of Bye-Bye Boring Bio. It’s now earning five-star reviews on Amazon
and inviting praise and results for readers across Main Street USA and the
world. It's exciting, and I am very grateful to you.”
– Nancy Juetten, Bye Bye Boring Bio
Testimonial
"Barbara has the gift of sifting through my verbiage and capturing the essence of my writing to make it memorable."
– Tama Kieves, author, This Time I Dance
Key Terms Used by BME
Content editing ensures your intended ideas are clearly expressed through minor rewrites, embedded questions for clarification, and suggestions for strengthening the content before the second editing review.
Copyediting involves taking care to polish your writing, eliminate wording problems (spelling, grammar, inconsistencies, wordiness, redundancies, etc.), set up standard formatting, build a table of contents, add/improve headings and subheads, and insert footnotes/endnotes if required.
Proofreading provides an essential quality control check on the previous two reviews. It includes thoroughly rereading your manuscript for any mistakes before it's deemed ready for the production phase.
You’ve built your business on great ideas. You’ve done the tough research. You’ve learned how to explain the nuances of your subject. You’ve honed your message to a fine point.
Now the world wants what you know. People are eager to learn what you have to teach.
Once you put it out there, your book represents you, your innovations, and your business. It builds your credibility and expertise. More than that, it helps you transform readers into clients while building your brand, visibility, and reputation.
Most important of all, your book can provide the cornerstone for making a difference in the lives of those you touch.
Yet for your manuscript to support these goals “big time,” it needs to have the magic touch only expert editing can provide.
That’s what you’ll achieve when you tap into the editing expertise of Barbara McNichol Editorial (BME).
Take your writing from good to excellent.
In the process of editing your work, BME will:
Add artistry and persuasion, clarity and consistency to your writing
Revise phrases to improve the expression of your ideas
Suggest strong, on-purpose chapter titles and subheads
Get rid of jargon, wordiness, redundancy, repetition
Format your manuscript so it’s ready for the design phase
Correct grammar, spelling, sentence structure, and a lot more
Choose book editing services that add polish, power, and professionalism to your writing.
Click on these links for full details.
6 Kinds of Projects for Precision Editing
3 Expert Editing Packages that Make Your Writing Life Easier
The Ultimate Editorial Package – where it all comes together
You’ve done your research and written a quality piece, yet you know it’s not quite “ripe and ready” for publication. You’ve also reached the point of not being able to “see” your own writing in a fresh way.
What’s the solution? Turn over your masterpiece to an accomplished editor who will:
Add power to how your writing expresses your concepts
Provide accuracy and artistry, clarity and consistency
Help you project a professionalism that builds your reputation
What does your project need at this time? Choose from these 6 editing options.
Thoroughly edit a book chapter or article you’ve written
Ensure it reads clearly and smoothly from a reader’s point of view
Provide one additional review after your
changes/additions
Your investment: $200 for editing up to 2,000 words
Craft a sharp sales piece that markets your book and/or programs
Adapt it for printed and/or electronic outreach
Provide initial writing plus two revisions after your changes/additions
Your investment: $300 (1-sided) – $600 (2-sided)
Provide sharp editing of the bio you compose
Adapt your best bio to 3 different lengths for various purposes
Your investment: $150 for editing your bio in 3 versions
Provide a template structure for your proposal (Overview, About the Author, Marketing/Publicity, Competitive Books, Chapter Summaries)
Edit all elements you’ve written to produce a powerful, marketing-focused book proposal
Polish your Book Proposal until it’s ready to send to agents/publishers
Edit Sample Chapters to include in your Book Proposal
Your investment: $600 for editing a book proposal up to 6,000 words; $200 for each sample chapter up to 2,000 words
Craft an attention-grabbing book synopsis and/or cover/query letter for agents/publishers
Provide initial draft and one revision after your changes/additions
Note: This service only applies to book proposals and/or manuscripts BME has edited.
Your investment: $400
Write the Foreword and/or testimonials based on interviews and/or initial drafts
Do one revision after receiving feedback from the person interviewed
Note: This service only applies to manuscripts BME has edited.
Your investment: Will be set based on what’s required
“I did not realize how much I needed your help. It was actually
intimidating to see the magic you were able to do with my draft copy. This
work for a national magazine article put me in a good light.”
– Bill
Johnson, CSP, professional speaker
More testimonials . . .
Call
520-615-7910 to discuss which writing projects need an expert editor’s touch
today.
You know from being an astute consumer that when services are bundled, you save—not only money but time.
In the case of editorial services, you’ll save all the “get to know you and your project” costs from multiple vendors and gain a consistent voice for your work. That’s why BME offers three Expert Editing Packages.
These packages are designed to bring together key components that will move your authorship forward. Take a look and see which ones suit your needs right now.
Book Synopsis/Query Letter
Book Proposal up to 7500 words
Your Best Bio presented in 3 lengths
Sample Chapters up to 2500 words each
Your investment: $1200 and up
Call 520-615-7910 to discuss your Proposal.
Your Manuscript Review Report filled with suggestions for changes you’d make in structure and substance that will take your manuscript to the next level
3-Page Sample Edit and BME Editing Plan for the Complete Content/Copy Editing phase
Word Trippers ebook, a word choice resource for
choosing the perfect word when it really matters
Your investment: $1,500 for a 50,000-word manuscript (prorated
based on word count)
Eager
(not anxious) to start?
Complete this
Quick-Start Planner now.
Finalized the number and sequencing of your chapters
Included all elements required to meet your stated objectives
Re-evaluated all content for its value to the whole manuscript
As a result of this extensive edit, you'll have a professionally polished and formatted book in a word processing document that's ready for the design and production phase.
This Complete Content/Copy Editing Package delivers conscientious editing that polishes your writing until it shines. It includes:
Initial edit with corrections, questions, suggestions
Second review to incorporate all of your changes/additions
Final proofread to catch lingering language and format glitches
Your investment: BME provides a FREE 3-Page Sample Edit of your manuscript and an Editing Plan with a custom fee.
Quick-Start Planner gets the process rolling; FREE 3-Page Sample Edit gives you before/after edits so you can preview the results.
“Barbara, you certainly made my life easier with
your expert editing. I have always known that ‘it takes a village’ to
do anything worthwhile, and I stand on some very fine
shoulders, yours included!”
– Amy Showalter, The Underdog Edge: How Ordinary People Change the
Minds of the Powerful . . . and Live to Tell About It
Wouldn’t writing a book be much easier if you could get both excellent service and stellar results from one source?
Hurrah! Your “shopping around” days are over. Instead of spending valuable time searching, you can feel both confident and productive having BME on your team for multiple projects.
Consider BME’s comprehensive package to be your definitive ticket to excellence in advancing your writing, your book, and your influence.
The 6 Kinds of Projects for Precision Editing and 3 Expert Editing Packages come together in this Ultimate Editorial Package that includes:
Book Proposal
2-3 Sample Chapters
Book Synopsis and/or Query Letter
Your Best Bio
Structural/Strategic Manuscript Review
Complete Content/Copy Editing
Foreword/Testimonials
Book and/or Speaker One-sheet
Your investment: Let’s create a plan that suits your priorities and meets your authorship goals.
Call 520-615-7910 to explore the right book editing services for you—right now!
“Barbara McNichol was thorough, professional and insightful in editing The
Prostate Storm. I particularly appreciated her sensitivity for my writing
style rather than imposing her own preferences. She helped me
fix rough
chapters and fine-tune others into a publishable work. I highly recommend
Barbara to authors seeking a first-rate editor.”
- Steve Vogel, The Prostate Storm: A Journey Through Prostate Cancer used immediately in marketing.
Barbara McNichol Editorial
Editor@BarbaraMcNichol.com
www.BarbaraMcNichol.com
520-615-7910 (phone)
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